July 8, 2011

The first poem I wrote.

One of my language exchange partners, she's from Sweden, asks me to write a poem as "homework", and present it to her during our weekly chatting. Woooow, such a biggggggggg challenge! It is not easy for me to express thoughts in English, but she says "just write! forget grammar! it's just a way to show your emotion. no right or wrong.", so then I try to write.

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I dreamed about you last night, again.
It would be perfect if it were true.
Where are you? My Mr.Right.
I can't see you when I wake up.

I climb to the highest mountain, you're not there.
I down to the deepest ocean, I can't find you.
I go to the west, no one knows you.
I travel to the east, you haven't been there.

Where are you? My Mr.Right.
Don't you know I'm longing for you?
I dreamed about you days and nights.
It would be perfect if you could come to me from the dream.
I dream that it wouldn't be a dream.

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